Sick vs Healthy (2nd)

 Kia Ora, Talofa Lava, And hello. Greeting's to all of you bloggers today i am showing you my sick sentences and my healthy sentences. For example my sick sentences are just plain old sentences with no descriptive words in it. But in my Healthy sentences there a lot of adjectives,Wow words and other stuff like that. Have you ever come paired to things together? If you have then make sure to comment what you did in class or out of class. Here are my Sick Sentences

SICK SENTENCES...

The Big Giant opened his mouth to eat something or someone. As he opened his mouth he yelled,His Head was a grey color.He was really big and angry!

That was my Sick Sentences let's see if i can compare it with my healthy sentences!

Healthy Sentences...

The Immense Giant opened his mouth as wide as he could and yelled. His yell was as loud as a Rouring lion.  Angrily he shook of all the grass that was on him and swept it away. By the facials that the giant was making you could tell he was madly angry!

As you could see I compared both of the sentences and which one do you think is better? the Healthy or the Sick Sentences make sure you comment which one you think. Have a great 48 hours of more learning before Monday. Stay safe and stay kind. BLOG YA LATER😁

 

My covid-19 walk to the duck pond

 Kia Ora and welcome to another one of my blog posts. Today i am blogging about my walk to the duck pond with my Mum and Brother. On a nice and sunny day in lock down we had nothing to do because it was covid-19 so my Mum thought of a great idea to go to the duck pond and see all ducklings and experience the nature and daylight. So i took my skate board and my Brother(Memphys) took his scooter and my mum walked. We drove by car to the duck pond and we walked around it. Once i was afraid of the geese when i was 5 but then i got over my fear and enjoyed my time there it was really cool instead of staying on my device all day. I also saw baby ducks called (Ducklings) they were newborns and they had just came a few weeks ago from the looks of it. I had spotted a tui one of NZ's native birds. It was in a kowhai tree like the one at school, I saw swans there they were black swans swimming with their baby's it was really fun because it was hot and sunny that is what made it so fun and cool. Here are some pictures of my day at the Duck pond. 

I hope you enjoyed looking at the pictures her is a question for you ti answer in the comments down below. Have you ever been to a duck pond or the Mo tat duck pond the one next to Mo tat. I hope you have a good rest of the week see you next week on Monday! Stay safe and stay kind 😀😁

Sick vs Healthy (1st)

 Kia Ora this is Persaies here with another post, this post is about my prompt {Sick vs Healthy} what we have to do as a class we have to make a sick sentence but then we change it around to a healthy sentence!.I hope you enjoy my sick vs Healthy sentences.

Sick sentences.

moving across the hot dessert were there was no water "how ever could we live" said the mother on board of the ship. Coming out of no were there is a storm a dark cloud comes into the sky and SWOOSH everything is gone.

Healthy sentences.

Drifting, Across the blazing hot dessert were there was no refreshment and no water to drink. "Oh my were is water we need water it is so hot out here" shouted the mother with anger. Suddenly coming out of no where there is a dark thunder cloud going to explode like a volcano erupting. SWOOSH everything had disapiered like a mistery.

As you could see in those sentences i added more adjectives in my healthy and less in my sick sentences. Comment which one you think is better Healthy or Sick. BLOG YA LATER.😁😎

My lock down drawing of a coral reef

 Kia Ora blogger's. This is Persaies writing another blog post i am sorry i have not been posting a lot but i hope you enjoy this blog post. This post is what we have to do as a class in lock down and i decided to draw my coral reef on a peice of paper. Here is a question for you to answer in the comments have you ever done something like this before in your home learning. I hope you enjoy and like my picture i drew.

Stay safe and be kind during this time of staying at home. Have a good week Blog Ya Later.