My genre writing!

Hello everyone this last week of school we have been learning how to turn a sick sentence into a more better kind of sentence. we have also been learning to put simile's and metaphors in our writing. As we get through our writing we also have to put some out description in out writing here is my writing in genre.(reminder this is from my -sky path story-)

Recklessly the elderly woman stood on the bumpy dirty terrain beneath her feet. As the Woman was walking towards the immense tall roller coaster. Lazily the old looking Woman stood to her side with no eye contact of was going to happen!. As she stood to the side of the dirty roller coaster she Suddenly fell off the silent side of the long and curly old abandon roller coaster. The End

that is my story please comment if you like it and here is a question for you have you ever done a genre before if you have please tell me what it is and what you think it is if not. have a great 2 weeks of holiday and BE KIND😁🍉🍒